每周 A 档作文 · W39(周五 10/2 补档)· U3《To be a good learner》学会学习
对应周次:W39(9/28-10/4,U3 开单元周)
对应章节:Module 1 · U3 To be a good learner(学会学习)
核心语法:success 四态 · stop doing vs to do · manage to do · as…as 同级比较 · It's better to do A than to do B · teach oneself
当周素材:作文素材库/U3_Good_learner_素材库.md(名言三句 + 富兰克林句)
字数:约 160 词(江苏中考要求 不少于 90 词,达标且有余量)
档位目标:A 档(内容集中 · 用词高级 · 句式多样 · 语法准确 · 总-分-总 3 段)
补档说明:本篇按计划应在 10/2(周五) 生成,因国庆假期未出任务,10/8 补档,并折进 10/8 每日任务供孩子练写。
🎯 一、作文题目
My way to be a good learner(我成为好学者的方法)
提示:介绍你的学习方法——计划、习惯、态度,可引用本单元名言,并表达你做终身学习者的愿望。
✍️ 二、A 档范文 · 中英逐句对照
共 10 句 · 总-分-总 3 段 · 约 160 词 | 网页端可一键「隐藏中文 / 隐藏英文」自测背诵
| 段落 | 英文 | 中文 | ✨ 亮点 |
|---|---|---|---|
| 🟦 总起 | As the saying goes, "A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step." | 正如谚语所说:"千里之行,始于足下。" | As the saying goes 引出名言 | begin with |
| 🟦 总起 | To be a good learner, I have taken my first step — making a study plan. | 为了成为一名好的学习者,我已经迈出了我的第一步——制定学习计划。 | To be… 目的状语 | take the first step |
| 🟩 展开 | First, I make a study plan every week and manage my time well. | 首先,我每周制定学习计划,管理好自己的时间。 | make a study plan | manage our time well |
| 🟩 展开 | I never stay up late, because studying is like rowing a boat against moving water; if we don't move forward, we will fall behind. | 我从不熬夜,因为学习如逆水行舟;如果我们不前进,就会落后。 | because 原因状语从句 | if 条件句 | fall behind |
| 🟩 展开 | What's more, I am curious about everything and often teach myself English by reading English stories. | 而且,我对一切充满好奇,经常通过读英文故事自学英语。 | What's more 递进 | be curious about | teach oneself | by + doing |
| 🟩 展开 | When I meet difficult words, I never stop trying. | 遇到难词时,我从不停止尝试。 | When 时间状语从句 | stop doing(doing 是被停掉的动作) |
| 🟩 展开 | Last term, I succeeded in getting an A in the English exam, and it was a great success. | 上学期,我成功地在英语考试中拿到了 A,这是一次巨大的成功。 | succeed in doing | success(be a success) |
| 🟩 展开 | It's better to learn how to do things than to depend on others, so I often teach myself instead of waiting for teachers. | 学会怎样做事比依赖别人更好,所以我常常自学,而不是等着老师教。 | It's better to do A than to do B | instead of doing |
| 🟨 总结 | I believe that the love of learning is as important in studying as breathing is in running. | 我相信,学习中对学习的热爱和跑步中的呼吸一样重要。 | that 宾语从句 | as … as 同级比较(分隔式) |
| 🟨 总结 | Let's take the first step now, and we will be lifelong learners! | 让我们现在就迈出第一步,我们都会成为终身学习者! | 祈使句 + and | lifelong learner 呼应主题 |
🔗 关联词运用:as / because / if / What's more / so / and / instead of —— 多句型衔接,结构清晰。
📖 三、整篇连读(朗读 / 抄写用)
英文
As the saying goes, "A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step." To be a good learner, I have taken my first step — making a study plan.
First, I make a study plan every week and manage my time well. I never stay up late, because studying is like rowing a boat against moving water; if we don't move forward, we will fall behind. What's more, I am curious about everything and often teach myself English by reading English stories. When I meet difficult words, I never stop trying. Last term, I succeeded in getting an A in the English exam, and it was a great success. It's better to learn how to do things than to depend on others, so I often teach myself instead of waiting for teachers.
I believe that the love of learning is as important in studying as breathing is in running. Let's take the first step now, and we will be lifelong learners!
中文
正如谚语所说:"千里之行,始于足下。"为了成为一名好的学习者,我已经迈出了我的第一步——制定学习计划。
首先,我每周制定学习计划,管理好自己的时间。我从不熬夜,因为学习如逆水行舟;如果我们不前进,就会落后。而且,我对一切充满好奇,经常通过读英文故事自学英语。遇到难词时,我从不停止尝试。上学期,我成功地在英语考试中拿到了 A,这是一次巨大的成功。学会怎样做事比依赖别人更好,所以我常常自学,而不是等着老师教。
我相信,学习中对学习的热爱和跑步中的呼吸一样重要。让我们现在就迈出第一步,我们都会成为终身学习者!
🔗 四、当周知识点 & 素材对照(逐句标注出处)
| 本文句子 | 对应当周知识点 | 对应素材库句子 |
|---|---|---|
| "A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step."(引用谚语) | begin with 以……开始 | 素材 2(名言三句) |
| make a study plan every week / manage my time well | make a study plan · manage our time well | Welcome 短语 #19 |
| studying is like rowing a boat against moving water; if…fall behind | against 逆着 · if 条件句 · fall behind | 素材 3 + Welcome 短语 #8/#14 |
| I never stay up late | stay up very late | Reading 短语 #13 |
| I am curious about everything | be curious about | Reading 短语 #15 |
| teach myself English by reading English stories | teach oneself sth / by + doing | Reading 短语 #10/#11 |
| I never stop trying | stop doing(doing = 停掉的动作) | Welcome 短语 #18 |
| I succeeded in getting an A…a great success | succeed in doing · success(be a success) | Welcome 短语 #14(success 四态) |
| It's better to learn how to do things than to depend on others | It's better to do A than to do B | Welcome 短语 #17 |
| the love of learning is as important in studying as breathing is in running | as…as 同级比较(分隔式) | Welcome 短语 #2 |
| Let's take the first step now, and we will be lifelong learners! | 祈使句 + and · take the first step · lifelong learner | Welcome 短语 #16 + Reading 短语 #1 |
🏆 五、为什么这是 A 档(评分要点)
| A 档维度 | 本文体现 |
|---|---|
| 内容(8-10 句,集中) | 3 段共 10 句,全部围绕"我的学习方法",不偏题 |
| 用词(高级替换) | as the saying goes / manage / curious / instead of / lifelong 替换 good / study hard |
| 句式(复合句) | because / if 条件句 / as…as / 祈使句 + and / It's better to…than… |
| 语法(基本无误) | succeed in doing / stop doing / teach oneself / manage to do / as important as 全准确 |
| 段落(总-分-总) | 总起(名言 + 迈出第一步)→ 展开(计划/态度/自学/成功)→ 总结(愿望 + 倡议) |
| 字数(≥90) | 约 160 词,达标 |
| 加分点 | 开头结尾引用本单元名言,紧扣教材,阅卷亮眼 |
家长/孩子用法:先读范文 1 遍 → 网页端「隐藏英文」试着口头复述 → 抄写 1 遍(练书写)→ 对照素材库黑体关键词复习。