U4 · Task(单元写作)预习笔记(背默版 · 20 条)
教材:译林版(2024) 8A U4《Hands-on fun》· Task(写作:我的 DIY 经历)
本课定位:U4 收官写作课——"我的 DIY 经历"素材包 + 时间线句型。20 条按"起因 → 经过 → 结果"三段排列,背熟就能直接拼出一篇记叙文,是中考"经历类"作文的通用骨架。
预测确定性:🟡 基于单元话题推断 | 条数:20 条
⏱ 20 分钟:保底 8 条 5′ → 句子精读 3′ → 进阶 6 条 4′ → 冲 A 6 条 3′ → 必背句 + 快测 5′;做不动就停在保底组。
一、核心词组 · 保底 8 条(中文 → 英文)
看中文说英文,说不出的看右侧英文,再遮住中文重来一遍。
| 笔记# | 中文 | 英文 | 红笔标注 / 考点 |
|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | 我的 DIY 故事 | My DIY story | 写作标题 |
| 2 | 一天,我决定做一个…… | One day, I decided to make … | decide to do 决定做 |
| 3 | 起初,这并不容易。 | At first, it was not easy. | at first 与 later / finally 呼应 |
| 4 | 我一步步按照说明做。 | I followed the instructions step by step. | step by step 一步步地 |
| 5 | 我不断尝试,没有放弃。 | I kept trying and didn't give up. | keep + doing;give up 放弃 |
| 6 | 最后,我成功了! | Finally, I made it! | make it = 成功做到 |
| 7 | 它给我带来极大的快乐。 | It brought me great joy. | bring sb sth;joy n. 快乐 |
| 8 | 我为自己感到自豪。 | I felt proud of myself. | be proud of + 反身代词 |
二、归类记忆 · 写清一件事的三步时间线
写"经历类"作文就按这三段走——时间词 + 对应句子都配好了,直接按顺序拼就是一篇。
| 段落 | 时间词 | 本课句子 |
|---|---|---|
| 开头 · 起因 | One day, … / At first, … | One day, I decided to make a paper rose. / At first, it was not easy. |
| 经过 · 怎么做 | Then, … | I followed the instructions step by step. / I kept trying and didn't give up. |
| 结尾 · 结果与感受 | Finally, … | Finally, I made it! / It brought me great joy. / I felt proud of myself. |
📖 三、句子精读(教材书例句 · 抓从句)
句子才是学英语的核心:先读出主干(谁 + 做什么),再找从句在修饰谁。每句读 3 遍。
| # | 教材书例句 | 中文 | 从句 / 考点拆解 |
|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | Sometimes I made a mess, but I never gave up. | 有时我把事情弄得一团糟,但我从不放弃。 | 并列句:but 表转折;make a mess 搞得一团糟;give up 放弃(代词放中间 give it up) |
| 2 | We can make new things out of old ones. | 我们可以用旧东西做出新东西。 | make A out of B 用 B 做成 A;ones 代替前文的复数名词,避免重复 |
| 3 | All in all, DIY makes my life colourful. | 总而言之,DIY 让我的生活丰富多彩。 | 宾补结构:make + 宾语 + 形容词(使……变得……);all in all 总而言之 |
四、进阶 6 条
这 6 条重点看「红笔标注」,知道考什么比背下来更重要。
| 笔记# | 中文 | 英文 | 红笔标注 / 考点 |
|---|---|---|---|
| 9 | DIY 帮我们培养动手能力。 | DIY helps us develop hands-on skills. | help sb (to) do |
| 10 | 这是一种很好的放松方式。 | It is a good way to relax. | a good way to do |
| 11 | 我们可以以旧造新。 | We can make new things out of old ones. | make A out of B |
| 12 | 我从中学到了很多。 | I learnt a lot from it. | learn (a lot) from |
| 13 | 不仅……而且…… | Not only … but also … | 连接并列成分(要对称) |
| 14 | 此外…… | What's more, … | 写作连接词 |
五、冲 A 6 条
学有余力再攻。17–20 条是作文的开头态度句与结尾金句,直接提升档次。
| 笔记# | 中文 | 英文 | 红笔标注 / 考点 |
|---|---|---|---|
| 15 | 我热衷于 DIY。 | I am crazy about DIY. | be crazy about + doing |
| 16 | 没有哪个 DIY 活儿是做不到的。 | No DIY job seems impossible. | seem + 形容词 |
| 17 | 这需要时间和耐心。 | It takes time and patience. | It takes + 名词 |
| 18 | 有时我弄得一团糟,但我从不放弃。 | Sometimes I made a mess, but I never gave up. | but 转折并列句 |
| 19 | 熟能生巧。 | Practice makes perfect. | 收尾谚语 |
| 20 | 总之,DIY 让我的生活多彩。 | All in all, DIY makes my life colourful. | all in all 总结;make + 宾 + adj. |
六、句型全家桶(本课句型对号入座)
| 句型 | 结构 | 例句 |
|---|---|---|
| 决定做某事 | decide to do | I decided to make a paper rose. |
| 坚持做某事 | keep + doing | I kept trying and didn't give up. |
| 使……变得…… | make + 宾语 + 形容词 | DIY makes my life colourful. |
| ……的好方式 | a good way to do | It is a good way to relax. |
| 不仅……而且…… | not only … but also … | Not only my friends but also I like DIY. |
| 为……自豪 | be proud of | I felt proud of myself. |
七、易错提醒(只记正确写法)
- keep + doing(keep trying),不接 to do
- give up 代词放中间:give it up(不说 give up it)
- make it=成功做到(固定短语,不是"制作它")
- not only … but also … 连接的成分要对称(名词对名词、句子对句子);连接主语时谓语就近原则
- bring sb sth = bring sth to sb(bring me joy = bring joy to me)
- be proud of + 反身代词:myself / himself / ourselves 要与主语人称一致
八、同义句转换(中考句型转换的"等式")
I felt proud of myself.=I took pride in myself.It is a good way to relax.=It is a good way of relaxing.I learnt a lot from it.=I learned much from it.We can make new things out of old ones.=We can turn old things into new ones.
📌 本课必背 3 句
- I followed the instructions step by step and finally made it.(我一步步按说明做,最后成功了。)
- It brought me great joy and I felt proud of myself.(它给我带来极大的快乐,我为自己感到自豪。)
- DIY is a good way to relax and it helps us develop hands-on skills.(DIY 是很好的放松方式,也帮我们培养动手能力。)
🎤 学完就能用的一句话
Let me tell you how to make a paper plane.(我来告诉你怎么折纸飞机。)
🎯 快测 5 题(汉译英 · 答案就在上面)
把下面的中文翻成英文;不会的翻回去找,找到后读 2 遍(对 3 题就合格):
- 我的 DIY 故事 2. 我不断尝试,没有放弃。 3. DIY 帮我们培养动手能力。 4. 不仅……而且…… 5. 这需要时间和耐心。
答案:第 1、5、9、13、17 条
🔜 下一次预习:U5 · Welcome
📖 预习用:本课为 U4 单元写作,可先背熟本课 20 条,写"我的 DIY 经历"时直接套用。